A very good picture! The ship looks really big! Try to explain more about why you like this picture. What colours do you like? Why is it cool? Think deeper and write deeper so you can show me more of your ideas!
We say "found on the Internet" instead of "found in".
Remember you need 3-5 sentences to get a good mark!
A very good picture! The ship looks really big! Try to explain more about why you like this picture. What colours do you like? Why is it cool? Think deeper and write deeper so you can show me more of your ideas!
回复删除We say "found on the Internet" instead of "found in".
Remember you need 3-5 sentences to get a good mark!
2.5/5